tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post5933338905687367730..comments2023-09-27T00:22:36.310-07:00Comments on Cerita Aty Elias: Berani Cerita #10 : Pengantin Berkebaya MerahAty Eliashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08338168276251154176noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-68322998648726559252013-05-13T08:00:37.858-07:002013-05-13T08:00:37.858-07:00iya mba rin, makasih koreksix krn emang aku lg bel...iya mba rin, makasih koreksix krn emang aku lg belajar nulis2 nie ;-)Aty Eliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08338168276251154176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-13736575473872324982013-05-12T18:50:54.086-07:002013-05-12T18:50:54.086-07:00sepertinya masih kurang 'padat' ya mba,ban...sepertinya masih kurang 'padat' ya mba,banyak kalimat yg tidak perlu, IMHO.<br />tapi ide ceritanya oke ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-67014951840023918722013-05-08T04:15:56.501-07:002013-05-08T04:15:56.501-07:00iya mba rochma, makasih masukannya, kedepannya ins...iya mba rochma, makasih masukannya, kedepannya insya Allah lbh dperbaiki lagi :-)Aty Eliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08338168276251154176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-35793744385033928972013-05-07T21:23:12.757-07:002013-05-07T21:23:12.757-07:00tolong perhatikan penggunaan settingnya ya, mbak. ...tolong perhatikan penggunaan settingnya ya, mbak. karena sepertinya promptnya terlalu dipaksa diletakkan setelah perbincangan antara liza dan bundanya :)Ria Rochmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11523344958593397520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-50522828458898539242013-05-06T05:37:30.781-07:002013-05-06T05:37:30.781-07:00kufikir cmn aku yg berfikiran kek gituuu, apalagi ...kufikir cmn aku yg berfikiran kek gituuu, apalagi klo pake gadget agak2 susah komenx :-)Aty Eliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08338168276251154176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-23608744903376224952013-05-05T18:42:56.290-07:002013-05-05T18:42:56.290-07:00calon pengantin yang malang.... :(
*btw kalo pake ...calon pengantin yang malang.... :(<br />*btw kalo pake blogspot emang ribet ya kalo mau kirim komentar?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-62708850342793843662013-05-05T06:42:48.427-07:002013-05-05T06:42:48.427-07:00wokey, trims masukannya, baru belajar...hehehehehe...wokey, trims masukannya, baru belajar...heheheheheAty Eliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08338168276251154176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-84810784172787096592013-05-05T05:06:43.044-07:002013-05-05T05:06:43.044-07:00Perhatikan lagi penggunaan EYD dan huruf kapital d...Perhatikan lagi penggunaan EYD dan huruf kapital dong, uni. Setelah tanda petik ganda seharusnya huruf kapital tanpa didahului spasi :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-83877429587922015842013-05-04T19:42:53.202-07:002013-05-04T19:42:53.202-07:00Iya mba, minta ajarin sama banyak org, hehehe :-)Iya mba, minta ajarin sama banyak org, hehehe :-)Aty Eliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08338168276251154176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-68701790232007784222013-05-04T15:49:01.693-07:002013-05-04T15:49:01.693-07:00hiks,, aku jd sedih...
tapi bagus idenya mbakhiks,, aku jd sedih...<br />tapi bagus idenya mbakputeriamirillishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01480089945778290682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3587545569709900138.post-7577953623447980882013-05-04T15:46:59.966-07:002013-05-04T15:46:59.966-07:00ini sudah berhasil yah pasang bannernya...ini sudah berhasil yah pasang bannernya...puteriamirillishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01480089945778290682noreply@blogger.com